This is my first blog including everything in our live! I write this for developing my composition skills.

Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Activity 8-13 (P193)

Thesis statement: To me, there are many advantages of advertising, but I will mention only two: to stimulate business growth and to create jobs.

I. First, advertising is one of the principal factors in stimulating business growth.
A. If their advertising is successful and their sales go up, their business grows.
1. example-Burger King put clever ads on TV to try to get some of the fast food business from McDonald's.

II. One of the results of a stimulated economy is creation of jobs.
A. If a company grows and must produce more, it needs more employees.
1. example-Burger King
2. example-New Orleans Shirt Company.

Conclusion: Advertising is an essential incentive to develop and advance the capitalist economy.

Monday, December 11, 2006

The differences between living in dormitory and home.

I had lived outside in the rented house along for four and half years, and have moved into the dormitory recently. Both of them are quite different from living at home with parents. Living at home and in dormitory is similarly acceptable for many students. Each of them has their own merit and demerit.

The differences between these places are freedom and convenience. The most appealing attraction to live in dormitory is freedom. Basically, students living off-home can do every thing as they like without parent’s restriction. In addition, it would be fun to stay with the same age roommates. They can go out with friends in the midnight or discuss the assignment with roommate. In contrast with living in dormitory, living at home has less freedom than living in dorm. You have to go home and go to bed on time not to mention staying outside and playing whole night long. And even if you are completely exhausted when you get home and yearn for silence and relax, there is still someone will remind you a lot of things to do.

Speaking of convenience, no matter living at home or dorm has advantages in different ways. Living in dorm is convenient in traffic. Classrooms are just hear by where you live. You don’t have to wake up early and take the crowded transportation to school. All you have to do is sleep until the ten minutes before the beginning of class, then get up and go to classroom with free and easy. However, living at home is convenient in living which is more important than traffic. The cleaning clothes will always appear automatically in your closet, garbage will be removed everyday and there are lots of food to eat without buying and cooking. All the house works will be done before you get home.

General speaking, living in dorm is more freedom and living at home is more convenience. I can never tell which one is much better. I have experienced each of them and enjoyed in both very much.

Tuesday, December 05, 2006

Activity 6-1 P123

Two Teachers
Topic Sentence: Ali was hated by many students, but Ahmad was a good teacher and a lot of students liked him.
A. Attitude
1. Ali
a. His attitude was bad
b.He was lazy. He didn't give any homework because he didn't want to corret it.
2. Ahmad
a. His attitude about the students was very good.
b. He believed that if students like the theacher, they will kike his class and will do their best to satisfy the teacher.
B. Teaching Method
1. Ali
a. He just sat down on the desk in front of the class and read the book.
b. He thought he was just responsible to teach you what is in the book and I can do no more.
2. Ahmad
a. He began the class with a review of the last lesson, to make sure we understood the lesson.
b. He began to explain the new lesson on the blackboard several times.

A year later, Ali quit teaching and went to work in a private company; Ahmad is the manager of the best school in my city.

Activity P121

1. Over the past few years we in Moscow have hosted several groups of American students. Now it was our turn to visit them.
2.
(1)Students in U.S. ragged jeans eating a sandwich and drinking juice right in the middle of a lesson, while listening to the teacher and taking notes in his notebook.
(2)Students in U.S. are polite.
(3)Lakeside School is distingushed not only for its special teacher-student relationship but also for its high technical standards.
(4)The range of courses that American students have to choose from is stupendous.