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Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Activity 8-13 (P193)

Thesis statement: To me, there are many advantages of advertising, but I will mention only two: to stimulate business growth and to create jobs.

I. First, advertising is one of the principal factors in stimulating business growth.
A. If their advertising is successful and their sales go up, their business grows.
1. example-Burger King put clever ads on TV to try to get some of the fast food business from McDonald's.

II. One of the results of a stimulated economy is creation of jobs.
A. If a company grows and must produce more, it needs more employees.
1. example-Burger King
2. example-New Orleans Shirt Company.

Conclusion: Advertising is an essential incentive to develop and advance the capitalist economy.

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